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Hullo Stockmar. There's not too much one can say to something this brief--at least, no in-depth. You have a beginning. You have a character. All that struck me was the ...

Ha, oy...very brieftly, my impressions. Or perhaps I began that backwards... 'Lo Chernobyl. And on to brief impressions, specifically tied to pacing, sentence structure and character. To begin somethi

Hullo Aedomir. As the first thing then--is this "Other Fiction"? It seems, rather, in its archaic use of language and diction more apt to fantasy. ^_^ But that is slightly ...

'Lo Gahks, I rather like fragments--or poetry so brief as to leave doors open and minds meandering. When it comes to full-description, or exploring an idea through depth and out ...

Oy, but it's lovely--the Finnish, that is. I only know phrases and a few words in the language. But it's worth it all the same to try to listen to ...

I already told you, in this kind of story, it GETS background, only, it comes slowly. I only know of a few damn good writers that can make you understand ...

Oy, and this part is somewhat more present--it all happens in the moment, no interludes of thinking back. But it remains vaguely surreal. It's curious, but there are flickers of ...

Oy, these have always been worth the read--and this one seems somewhat more linear and less arbitrary than some of its predecessors. Ha, yet it keeps the off-the-wall humour as ...

'Lo. ^_^ You have some more than amusing dialogue--the exchange, in its repetition, is hilarious. That said, you've also some technical inconsistencies that distract the reader. VERB TENSE Er, don't ...

'Lo Vernon. I'll be brief. I think you've an idea that might vivid, that could be shown distinctly and in a light so disgusting it would make one cringe. But ...

Er, Chernobyl, you seem to be making remarks on your own story. If apt ones, rather curious, yes? ^_^; I ought to go over it...the dialogue is worth a moment ...

Privyet DD. ^_^ Oy, and I missed something like this? I've little to add as far as the critical goes--Colly and Amelia have touched those points I might have noted. ...

Brevity is the soul of wit--so 'tis said. I rather think wit gives brevity its soul, in the end. Though aside from that slightly impertinent sidenote, I wonder. You've stated ...

'Lo Sela! ^_^ Oy, you know I've told you your writing is good--more, I suppose, it has a storyteller's sense about it, and an un-self-conscious sort of directness. You've an ...

Hey Chernobyl, You rather know some of my thoughts already. But I'll sum up, so to speak, again--if briefly. The inner dialogue, confused and tormented on doubt is brilliant. I'm ...